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Friday, March 31, 2017

Paihia School Tryathlon


On Friday it was the Paihia School Tryathlon, we had to do the Run, the Bike ,and the Swim. My favorite was the Swim, we had to swim in the sea then ran to the school to get a bike to ride around the school, then we were done.

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Paihia School Beach Clean Up





On Friday Paihia School went to the Beach to have a Beach clean up there was lot’s of cigarettes and beer tops. Down behind the seat was cans and beer bottle’s. The Beach clean up was so fun. I even found some treasures.




Friday, March 17, 2017

Spider

Spider

The spider had eight big skinny legs.
The spider smelt like rotten fish.
He has big fat stinky warts on his body.
He has a big black bum that has a stinger to kill humans with so he can eat them like scrambled eggs.
They have antennas on their head.
They are always nasty and mean.
They act nice to you for a little bit then like trick you.
They are bigger then a two story house.
Their eyes are big as bean bags.
They live in the forest with big spider webs.
But they are scared of trolls because trolls eat them whole.

This is my fictional story about a spider. I was learning to use describing words in my story.  
I think I did good at describing the spider. Next time I think I should put a picture on the story.

Thursday, March 9, 2017

Yummy Tangelo


Tangelos  

I saw the Tangelo in my hand it looked like a bumpy ball. It smelt like sweet smell. I rubbed it slowly in my hand it was soft and mushy like the mussel on my leg. I slowly tear off the Tangelo’s skin it sounds like a snapping sound. It Tasted like a mandarin but sweeter. As I put it in my mouth the juice oozed down my mouth. It was yummy. The pips were hard as rocks. I loaded the tangelo quickly into my mouth because it was so good, I even devoured the pips.

This is my Tangelo story. I was learning to use Adverbs in my story. I think I have to work on doing Adverbs next week. I think I did well at describing the Tangelo by using my five sense’s, Look, smells, tastes, sounds, feels.
I think I did good at using my  5 senses.